Requesting for internship place

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Dear Ministry of Finance, Planning and Economic Development,
Am Mangeni Ivan pursuing a bachelor's degree of Commerce in Makerere University. Am I here to express my deep interest in working with you in areas of finance and accounting in this ministry as an internee.Not only am well organized but all i have a passion of creating a positive and productive working environment I this ministry.i gained interpersonal communication skills, computer skills which I believe can help me achieve a great success in this training.
I will be looking forward to hearing from you bout the progress of my internship request.

Yours faithfully,

Mangeni Ivan